🍻The Drunken Tongue🥂
One too many... Written for the Lana V. Lynx unofficial challenge, 'Fucked-up wedding Toasts'. Word limit: 75-150
Okay, my turn!
I’m Heidi’s currently drunk uncle Denny. And I ‘hck’, want to make a toast too. Hooray!
...Heidi, I love you, man.
Even if you were the frisky one, sneaking out at night to hang out with a ‘hck', bunch of horny boys, you’ll always be my favorite niece.
And remember that time I bailed you out of jail for shoplifting? That will 'hck', always be our secret....
And look at the man she just bagged! I'm not a gay or nothin, but c’mon! I’d ‘hck’, marry him too, haha. I don’t even care that he's Asian. Just wait till you see the geniuses Heidi spits out. Asians are ‘hck’, smarrrrt people...
Cheers to you Heidi and uh... Ju-ang, Ju-ang-yen? Can't I just call you Fred?
Anyway, love you both, man...
Is it me, or is it 'hck', gettin dizzy in here…
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(144 words)
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Lamar Wiggins
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Comments (10)
Ooof. That’s brutal. The level of embarrassment I would feel to even be in that room. Nicely done Lamar
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That felt soooo uncomfortable hahahahaha! No one should invite him anywhere anymore, lol
😂😂 short and funny, love it. the idea its “funny” to be brutally honest about the most inappropriate things is definitely a trait that runs in alcoholic families, one of which I am slightly a part of😫
🤣🤣 love this!
I can feel the cringing of every character that’s not even on the page. Great job!
Yep, you get the prize....been to a few - have ya.
"Ju-ang-yen? Can't I just call you Fred?" This just had me on the floor. Great toast, Lamar!
Hahahaha love this, Lamar. Sounds like the alcohol soaked gibberings of "that uncle" that always seems to be at weddings. Nice work, bud.
I love how terrible all the people are in these in the most subtle and overt ways. Great entry