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The Fool's Initiation

4- The Voyeur and the Prey

By CECILE HEBELLEPublished about 4 hours ago 10 min read

A few days passed; Frank had returned from his trip without paying any particular attention to his wife.

— Darling, I stopped by to see Kely yesterday afternoon and I just realized my cell phone was left at her place. I can't go now because I have an important meeting in Paris and I have to fly. You’d be a sweetheart to stop by her place and pick it up!

— Okay, I'll take a shower and head over to your friend's place! he said. Is she even there?

— Yes, she told me she’d be home between 12 and 3 PM.

Sabine drove off, but not to her meeting in Paris; she went to join me instead. Upon her arrival, I took the precaution of having her park her car in the house's closed garage. Between two cuddles, I took advantage of the coffee break to explain the plan's layout.

— I've made space behind the left door; go barefoot to avoid any noise, and stay hidden until he leaves.

— Wow! What a panoramic view, it’s fabulous, as if I were right in the room!

— Good! In the meantime, I'm going to put on an alluring outfit to provoke temptation.

— Since he’s often been focused on you, I don't think tempting him will be very complicated!

— You're right, actually! I just saw his car pass outside; he didn't waste any time!

— The gate is buzzing! Go on, disappear from my sight, I said with a complicit laugh.

I welcomed Frank with a wide, radiant smile which he returned, looking me up and down from head to toe.

— What a pleasure to see you, Kely, it’s been ages since we last saw each other!

— For me, it’s always a pleasure to see a handsome man like you! Even if you are my friend's husband! Shall I make you a coffee?

— Yes, with great pleasure, thank you, you’re a sweetheart!

— Here! You take the tray because I have to finish getting ready; you just have to follow me, and don't spill!

I went back and forth from the bedroom to the bathroom, while he sat in the armchair, constantly watching me greedily.

— You are truly splendid in that outfit; you exude an eroticism and sensuality that tickles my emotions!

— Yes, but you see, I don't like this top; I don't feel like wearing it after all. Here! Pass me the one next to you on the table.

Without paying attention and in a natural way, I unbuttoned my blouse, letting it fall to the floor while putting on the one he handed me.

— Ah! This one is better, isn't it? What do you think?

— Faced with the sight of your bust, I no longer have eyes for the blouse! It's sheer, I love transparency!

— They are beautiful and very firm, and I love exhibiting them!

— Could I check their firmness? he asked in a melodic voice.

— Well now! You’re quite the naughty one! If your wife knew...

— She’s adorable, but eating the same meal your whole life without changing the flavor gets tiresome... he retorted, placing his hand on my skin.

— Hum, maybe it's up to you to prepare the spice! No?

— To start with, you'd have to taste it! he said, leaning toward my chest.

This double game excited me terribly, knowing that Sabine's eyes were fixed on me on one hand, and on the other, because her man, whom she was handing over to me as prey, was not indifferent to me at all. My senses were heightened; I felt a wave of heat fill my stomach, a sensation that the woman in her closet must have been feeling as well. I knelt down, loosened his clothes, and released his powerful strength, settling into a position where Sabine could observe every detail of our actions.

— Sabine should be delighted to have a husband equipped with such a fine mount! I retorted, stroking his long shaft.

— Hmmm, if you only knew how long I have wanted you!

Frank slid my skirt to the floor, removed my lace, and placed his lips on my skin. He flipped me onto the bed while joining me with his beautiful, gleaming strength. In a sustained back-and-forth movement, I added, my gaze fixed on the wardrobe door:

— Hmmm, I imagine the three of us lying on a bed, with them taking you in turn... how good it feels!... I'm certain Sabine is a real naughty one...

— Hmm... I wish so much she were like you, so open and available, lending herself to every game!

He turned me over and took me from behind, moving like an enraged force, then delicately entered my most private circle, which I offered him generously. I couldn't stop thinking about Sabine, savoring every image of the scene with a knot in her lower belly close to exploding... I could feel Frank's animal intensity rising within him, his hands striking my curves harder and harder.

— Hummm, don't stop, I love it! Faster, go for it! I ordered while swaying my hips under the blows.

He spoke to me with raw words, terms that weren't insults to me at all but a true reflection of who I was. I felt him reach his peak, the perfect moment for me to turn around and welcome his strength between my lips to catch the tsunami of his essence.

Happy to have shared a very hot moment together, he thanked me for this unexpected welcome, took Sabine's phone, and disappeared. The time had come for me to release Sabine from her prison. Sabine appeared to me, perspiring, her eyes sparkling with pleasure, her blouse unbuttoned.

— What a man! I've finally unmasked him! I couldn't take it anymore; I was as revolted as I was excited! she cried out, taking me in her arms.

— He only did what you did a few days ago, my little darling!

— If I told you I had the time of my life... Captive, watching and submitting, I couldn't stop touching myself, going from one release to another. Touch me, look, I’m soaked.

I laid Sabine on the bed, verifying her claims for myself, soothing her senses through the fullness of her moans.

— Darling, I want more and I want it now, Sabine insisted. Take your belt and strike me.

— You know what you have to do! I told her while she was on her knees at the edge of the bed.

— I'm going to give myself to the first man that comes along and the next, non-stop! I'm going to drive him crazy over me!

— That's a very good idea, I retorted, stinging her skin, you'll have to return in the early morning, your skin marked, showing him the remains of your nightly pleasures!

— Oh yes! I'm going to do it, I swear to you...

— Then we'll invite him to the club with Marc, just to throw the truth in his face. — Hmmm, you're making me reach such a peak, darling, harder! I want to surrender to nothing but pleasure.

— We are both the same, and we'll enjoy ourselves as much as they'll suffer!

After these intense emotions, we both talked over an improvised lunch by the pool. To go along with her resolve, I made a suggestion.

— If you want to impress Frank and come back well-marked, I know a very private little circle where you can indulge in your wildest games and fantasies. If you're into it, we should go quite late at night, so you get home around five in the morning...

— I'm in, and maybe we could plan a first part of the program for the night? What do you think?

— Yes, but we need ideas, suggestions that match your most intimate desires! — I’d like to face the unexpected, real life, men driven by desire, strangers, submitting to a role play.

— Hum, you're going far, my darling, to the very edge of danger, because you never know who you'll run into!

— True, you're right, it's a fantasy and will remain just a fantasy.

— Not necessarily! Let me think a bit; I'm going to call a very "in-the-know" friend.

I contacted Sandy, giving her a quick rundown to see if any good ideas came of it. She had a friend who owned a very reputable boutique in the region, occasionally organizing ultra-private evenings at the request of couples or women seeking sensation. He met the demand by hand-picking the number and quality of partners based on the parameters he was given. She gave me his contact details, promising to call him right away and asking me to get in touch with him directly afterward.

After a short discussion with Sandy’s friend, he confirmed it was feasible but wanted to meet me beforehand if possible. I went back to Sabine.

— So, do you have good news? Sabine asked.

— I think we can arrange something, but first, you have to let me in on your fantasies; then, with my magic wand, we could probably settle everything... The first thing is to tell me the kind of partners you want to meet, their physique, their origins, their particularities, and the games you want to submit to... I know a few, and others I can guess, but you have to help me!

— I’d like to be in an unusual place, frequented by men looking for a very short adventure without any talk, just acts.

— Okay, so let’s say for a start: in a boutique at closing time, you find yourself alone in a projection booth... Would that suit you?

— Hmmm, I love it! The darkness, the film, barely seeing my predator, just feeling him... I’d need about ten, is that too many? Tall, built, and especially well-endowed by nature, and why not two or three men of color, all parading one after another, and ending up bound like you were the other day...

— Okay, let me handle it, and above all, not a word or any hint to Frank. Ideally, I’ll be the one to pick you up at your place.

Sabine headed back home, her heart and mind heavy with emotion. I immediately called Sandy’s friend back, confirming I’d come around 9 PM to finalize the scenario. Cyril was a tall, handsome guy in his early thirties, very friendly and calm. While talking with him, I realized all the experience someone in his profession could acquire. He told me about some very astonishing events, bordering on the unbelievable. What I was asking of him was classic for him, almost mundane.

He had a large database consisting mainly of men and couples devoted to this kind of encounter. Together, we had to go through the photographic files to choose the suitors from very explicit photos and details.

— I never would have thought so many people would be gathered in such a file, it’s unheard of!

— You have no idea how many human beings, men and women alike, are focused on these desires!

— Wow, I even see some very beautiful couples in your file here!

— There are a few with whom we’ve had fantastic evenings! And what does your friend look like physically?

— I have some recent photos taken a few days ago in a club...

— Wow! The young lady is a knockout! And you too, for that matter, from what I can see in the photo, you don’t let anything go to waste! he said, bursting out laughing.

— Oh no! I take the whole lot! I retorted.

— For the discipline side of things, we have a fully equipped room in the basement; in fact, I’ll give you a tour. I’m just closing up the shop and I’m all yours.

We went down to the basement, and I found myself in a voluptuously decorated room, possessing every imaginable piece of equipment to satisfy any penitent creature.

— I’ll show you the booth I’m planning to give her tomorrow. It’s spacious, and you can sit or even lie down if necessary. — And what about the films?

— I can set up a mix of discipline and shared pleasure; it’s the best way to keep her excitement at its peak. Do you want to see?

— I’m curious by nature, yes!

He entered a code on his wall keypad, and the film began moments later. I knelt on the small bench, leaning forward, contemplating the high-quality scenes.

— You don’t easily find these kinds of films in stores, do you?

— This one is a private production of real scenes shot by very beautiful girls, in which I also perform, he said, laughing.

— Ah! So you’re an actor too?

— In my spare time, yes...

— Oh yes! I see you appearing now, wow, what a powerful presence, it’s exciting me terribly!

— Do you like it? he said, letting his hand slide over my curves.

— To be honest, I won’t lie to you, I’d like to take the young lady’s place.

He lifted my short skirt, pushed my lace aside, and came into contact with my intimacy.

— Hum... I get the impression this film is having a spectacular effect on you! he said with a naughty air.

— Watching you on the screen, and knowing you are inside me, you're making me reach a peak like crazy...

— You're going to see me take Christine from behind now, he announced.

— Hmmmm... And what a deep connection!

— I’m going to synchronize your vision of the scene with your own senses now.

I quickly understood the meaning of his words when I felt him disengage and re-engage in another way, so that my vision was not just virtual, but could be felt deeply within me. This unusual scene plunged me into extreme pleasure before I felt a burning release submerge me.

I left the place, thanking him for his very warm welcome, hoping to have the chance to continue our exchanges the following day...

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About the Creator

CECILE HEBELLE

I write dark, intimate stories where pleasure and danger walk the same line.

My characters love too hard, fall too deep, and cross boundaries they never meant to touch.

If you like slow burns with teeth, you’re home. Discover more here.

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