I hope Cora's husband savors every bite
Not a crumb goes to waste, they lick their plates with delight
Then hopefully they enjoy the rest of their time
As they enter their golden years, away from their prime
And still look forward to dinner being served at night
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Author's Notes: This limerick was originally commented on Dharrsheena Raja Segarran's limerick, "Cooking Is A Scam."
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Thavien Yliaster
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Comments (4)
Omgggg, how am I only now seeing this??? I wanted to check something in that limerick of mine so I typed and searched "Cooking Is A Scam" on Vocal and your poem was the first result!
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Your use of rhyme and rhythm also adds to the overall flow of the poem. Keep up the good work!πππ
oh so clever! love the uplifting tone and works perfect as a response piece!