Feel It.. Write It… Communicate It
It’s What We Do
Write from experience…
Write what you know
Let readers feel your pain
And revel in your glow
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Let them cry alongside you
When someone passed
Chuckle at your snickers
When someone passed gas
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Make it real… Make it tangible
So they hear the barn owl’s screech…
Smell the smoke of the campfire
Taste the salt of the beach
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Brush their cheek against soft swaddling
Feel your pride as you hold your newborn
Taste baby spit as finger enters mouth
Grimace as diaper becomes suddenly warm
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As new romance hits the horizon
Blaze with heat from passionate fire
When love requited be not scorned
Make readers burn with aching desire
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Let them see the sunrise
Feel the morning fog
Smell the opening rosebud
Hear crunch of leaves beneath mossy log
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Yes writer, this is indeed your duty
But if you can’t make readers
Laugh, cry, smile, frown, FEEL
Just feel it yourself… But don’t mislead her
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp



Comments (2)
Spot on!
Truth be Told, I Love Surreal Poetry❤️