Hand Stamp
A sunny senryu
By Dana CrandellPublished 2 years ago โข Updated 2 years ago โข 1 min read
Photo by Juan Pablo Ramirez on Unsplash
Scorched, your cheeks glow red
Sun-seared while we slept - except
Where my hand had been
ยฉOctober 21, 20203, Dana O. Crandell. All rights reserved.
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About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (67)
Trying to go through the poetry and learn about the different types, there are so many. Vocal is a unique learning experience. Senryu -another type to learn. Congratulations on first place.
Belated congratulations! Doing my best to back track through what I missed. Very well done.
Masterpiece! โจ๐ฅ๐ซ
Very clever, Dana. And scary! An excellent first place piece!
Congratulations!
Enchanted!
Congratulations! Nice work!
Congratulations!
Congratulations! What a way to wake up- that image.
This is just perfect, Dana! Congrats on your win!
Amazing!!! Another first-place badge. It has to feel great! Congrats on a well-deserved win, Dana. So happy for ya!
Congratulations Dana! โค๏ธ
Fantastic buddy and many congratulations ๐๐๐๐
Congratulations Dana! Wowed by your achievement!
Woooop wooop, sir! Another fine entry, another fine win. Well done for this beautiful and touching piece that has just enough humour in it to stop it from being too queasy! Love this and congrats on first place! You've had an awesome year of placements this year! It's been awesome to be watching it!
Congratulations on 1st place, Dana! Well done. ๐ฅ๐
Congratulations ๐ on your success and win ๐ฅvery delicate and unique piece
Congratulations, Dana!!!! This one was a fav for sure ๐๐
Congratulations!.I can see why this won. Really cheeky and unerstatedly sincere. ๐
Her hee! Brilliant and cheeky! Congratulations ๐ฅณ
Congratulations. First place, so well deserved. I feel like someone who just watched a friend cross the finish line first.
You did a good job
This was good. Congratulations!
You did it, Dana! Congratulations!
Good job congratulations