Perversions lay low
Squeeze screams from sleep on deep breaths
Death bled whispered spells
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Halloween has come and gone, but Autumn is still a great time for a ghostly scare. I love to hear a good ghost story, especially while gathered around a campfire. Who doesnβt? I thought I would share a few of my very favorite Short Stories of Horror.
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WOW Thank you β€οΈ Samurai Sam β€οΈ Wild Wayne β€οΈ
The alliteration and breath-based phrasing (βsqueeze screams,β βsleep on deep breathsβ) creates a choking rhythm that mirrors the poemβs emotional claustrophobia.
Every syllable CREAKS in this one!
WOW Stunning work! You're on a roll! This commands attention! Get it gurl! πͺπΎπ
Oooo, I especially loved the idea of screams being squeezed and death bleeding whispered spells!