t h r e s h o l d
stream of consciousness | what comes back challenge
tattered {rags}
d i s s o l v e
in {couch}
c r a c k s
and
corners
{heart} snags
c r u m b l e s
w e e p s
{wells} overdrawn
-
t h i c k
salt
d e l u g e s
hot
s t r e a k s
down
chapped {cheeks}
m e r c i l e s s
sting
settling rivets
c a r v e d
deep
-
{air} drawn
d r a g s
across
drought {mouth}
into
h e a v e
h e a v y
{bones}
{breath}
*c a u g h t* in
shock f r a c t u r e s
{composure} s h a t t e r s
lead {gut}
c h u r n s
memories
b u r n
-
clutched {fists}
s h a k e
shock gripped
{sweat} d r i p p e d
rattled {brain}
words
t r i p
split {lips}
e c h o e s
u n r e s t r a i n e d
-
time stalls
-
drags onward
*
s u n r i s e
a c r o s s
bloodshot {eyes}
grief relents
o n e
f i n g e r
a t
a
t i m e
settled {mind}
m e m o r i e s
u n w i n d
*
a smile cuts
small mercy
into
salt-tight
cheeks
first in weeks
a laugh even
casts light
in the
h o l l o w
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night—I’m humbly one of the vessels they use to come to life.
Also, i love you:)



Comments (4)
Loved every word 🌿
a long brutal night of the soul before a new morning
Beautifully done, Krtisten!
Beautiful. Sad. Love all the internal rhyming and similar words. Well done lass. This is likely to place.