Should I?
The Dawn of Humanity: A Kayleigh Fraser Unofficial challenge
Wonder⊠delight⊠ignite, explode within! Magenta, cyan, yellows swirl⊠Euphrates joins her three quicksilver sisters⊠rushing past my ambling feet. Havilahâs golden nuggets rest alongside onyx. Luscious fruit drips exquisite nectar... cottonwool lambs frolic with frisky lion cubs. All mine to enjoy⊠except⊠eyes linger; hand outstretched⊠just one bite?
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Authorâs Note: I hope itâs obvious that the Bibleâs Garden of Eden is this storyâs context!
Written for: The Story of Humanity, Kayleigh Fraser Unofficial challenge (50 words exactly).
I first learnt of the challenge while reading JBazâs story (see below) & was inspired by it.
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Comments (6)
Yes, your context was very clear and your story was soooo gorgeously written! I loved it!
Bravo! Such poetically crafted context. Great micro and challenge entry!
Fantastic work! Really wonderful wordsmithing, could tell right away that the story was on Eden :)
I definitely got the context. You so beautifully immersed us into paradise and temptation! Nicely done âšđđ€đđ
Exquisite great take on the challenge
I got paradise from it, Angie. Nicely done.